This is my first go at opinion writing and trying to convince people that my opinion is right.
Opinion writing - Baby deaths in New Zealand
Do you think babies should be safe in their own homes?
Well in New Zealand, on average 1 baby dies every month
from homicide. New Zealand has the highest rate of child
murder in the OECD.
I think child murder is terrible police should be
investigating more. If someone takes a life they should
spend life in prison. It's dumb that people get short
sentences. Kids get drowned in BATHS!
And people think it's fine!
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