Thursday 3 December 2020

My practice at opinion writing

This is my first go at opinion writing and trying to convince people that my opinion is right.

Opinion writing - Baby deaths in New Zealand



Do you think babies should be safe in their own homes? 

Well in New Zealand, on average 1 baby dies every month

from homicide.  New Zealand has the highest rate of child

murder in the OECD. 

I think child murder is terrible police should be

investigating more. If someone takes a life they should

spend life in prison. It's dumb that people get short

sentences. Kids get drowned in BATHS!

And people think it's fine!