Monday, 8 June 2020

My Colour poem - no sound

Purple feels like
a rock hard gem
but a breakable one.
Purple smells like coal
It sounds like glass
breaking on the floor.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 August 2020 at 12:25

    Hello My name is Keira from St Patricks school I like your poem alot and I liked that it all made sense and I could understand it but maybe next time u could make it longer so I could enjoy it about more



    From: Keira

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2020 at 12:12

    Hello I am Susie
    I like your poem it is very interesting, and it looks like a good piece of writing. Maybe next time you make one you could explain it a bit more.

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  3. Anonymous24 August 2020 at 12:11

    Hi, Ocean I love this poem but maybe next time you could explain it a bit more. Otherwise awesome!

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  4. Ⓝⓔⓗⓐ.Ⓐ.Ⓝ9 September 2020 at 13:32

    Hi Ocean this is Kaiva and Neha from Edmund Hillary School. We like yout peom. It is interesting. Keep working hard.

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